Victoria Jones TS #4

Tutoring Session #4 Ailin Xia
Date: October 1, 2017
Topic/Skill: Paraphrasing


Ailin was having trouble working through her homework on paraphrasing a paragraph into a few different sentences. In class they were instructed to read an article about the power of attraction provided to them, summarize the passage, and talk about why “inner beauty is real beauty” related to the passage. I had a chance to read the article myself and it was very advanced. Ailin did not have trouble understanding the passage, but rather how to organize her thoughts in an organized manner. She went ahead and began a first draft which I then walked through with her to understand the most important points and how to appropriately organize the information. This will be really useful when Ailin decides to pursue graduate school and know how to summarize articles and information. She was able to list main topics and themes, the thesis statement, and finished with strengths and weaknesses of the article in general.

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